When the droplet of rain
fell, touching her face
imitating her tears making a way
through her eyes,
it hid the pain,
and all her fears.
It canceled out the melancholy sung
by her heart,of missing him
by its sound of hitting ground.
It concealed her feeling blue
for him not being around
with the sight of flowers blooming
It camouflaged what she wanted no one to see
it masked her, who really was she !
-THEMOONLIGHTREVERIE
This is beauty redefined!❤️
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Thank you so much Sameera, for your kind appreciation ! ❤
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😍👌🏼
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Thank you ❤ :*
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I love the opening and everything else that follows……..the yearning could be felt . Beautiful poetry
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I’m so happy to read that, so glad that you resonated with it ! ❤
Thank you so much for all your love and support ! ❤
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It’s a pleasure always 😊❤️🤗
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❤ ❤
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This was wonderfully written and so true to its title. The rain can hide so much pain and disguise hurt by blending tears. I love how you were able to mix the beauty of rain with the beauty of feelings of crying and blended them into one emotion. This was beautiful.🌹🌹
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Indeed ! sometimes that pain is too much to be contained and in those time rain comes to the rescue, where it, even for a brief moment helps one to be real yet keep it hidden ! ❤
Thank you so much for all the love and support Roy ! 🙂
It means so much to me !
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Very true lovely, rain can bring out the real feelings in us and that makes us display courage. This was a beautiful post with the most beautiful element used.🌹🌹
It’s my pleasure to read such heartfelt work, love your talent.❤️🌹
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I’m touched ! ❤ 🙂
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As we all are by your beautiful writing.🌹🌹
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❤ ❤
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❤️🌹
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Bravo. Love this.
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I’m humbled and so touched.
Thank you so much ! 🙂
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Moonlight, this is so beautiful, you can feel the heartache and relate to trying cover it up and move beyond it.
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Thank you so much, your words made my heart swell ! ❤
It means so much !
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Awww I’m so glad, you should feel proud Moonlight, it’s a wonderful poem!😊 ❤️
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I’m so touched by your kind words for me ! ❤
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❤ 🙂
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Tears of sadness, but for her greatest joy. Loneliness made it rain, sometimes you just can’t hide the pain! Beautifully expressed!
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How rightly you pointed, that for her those tears brought joy, and that’s something very difficult to be explained, thank you so much for understanding the essence of this ! 🙂
Your comments always make me happy ! 🙂
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Always a pleasure!! 😊
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🙂 🙂
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I remember crying in the rain. It just hides the emotion you wish to hide from the world, camouflaging one from everything.
This is beautiful. 🙂
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Indeed, rain carries so much with it, the pain and happiness and so much more, healing and hurting all at the same time ! 🙂
Thank you so much for your ever so kind words ! 🙂
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Wow so nice.😊
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Thank you so much ! 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you so much ! 🙂
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Lovely piece!
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Thank you so much ! 🙂
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This is so so beautiful ❤️
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Thank you so much for your kind words ! 🙂
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Always my pleasure
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🙂 🙂
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Stupendous….it correlates soo much with my post “raindrops” ❤️
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Thank you so much, I’ll check your post ! 🙂
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This is such a bittersweet poem. The rain acts to hide her pain but it also hides who she is. Beautifully written. -Jill
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Thank you so much, yes it was raining while I was writing this and it was one of those days where my spirits were a little low 🙂
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I think you channeled the experience into a beautiful poem that you shared.
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