She stopped for a while to think,
why she was where she is?
and if she was meant to be there,
why is it that every moment,
is a moment of struggle and despair.
If she is meant to be happy,
why every single day is followed with
breaking down before the pillow.
Life, in strange ways, is misleading sometimes,
a puzzle, stubborn to be solved at all,
it takes to a path beautiful,
and the moment surroundings become comfortable
a hurricane arrives following destruction and relocation.
She stops, and looks back to the path she had been to,
thinks about all the times she had relocated,
every time with a spirit, higher than before,
a spark lightening her up, fuelling her to take on the world,
rather it seems the fuel is ending now, the spark no longer brightening
rather, her heart is starting to collapse in that fire,
becoming just remnants of once a fierce soul.
-THEMOONLIGHTREVERIE
Photo byย Anthony Tranย onย Unsplash
‘…. heart starting to collapse in that fire, becoming remnants of just once a fierce soul.’
So relatable.. awestruck..
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Thank you so much again ! โค
your words, are comforting, and I'm glad you could understand the emotion as always โค
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…and every time, your posts make me skip one or two words in excitement.. leaving typos for you to edit.. ๐๐
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*in excitement.. see.. again.. ๐คฆ๐
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Haha ! That’s such a compliment ! ๐
I don’t mind, doing it ! ๐ โค
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๐๐ .. No no.. that’s not done.. will try be calm and not to repeat it.. ๐๐ผ๐
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Haha ! no no excitement is good, you can not be calm and it will be absolutely fine for me ๐
I like the excited you ! ๐
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C’est la vie!
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Indeed, it is ! ๐
Thank you so much !
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You can never imagine how much I needed to read this at this point if my life.
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I’m glad it could be of any meaning to you ! ๐
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts ! ๐
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I am in love with “spark lightening her…. ” wonderful and brilliant
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Thank you so much for such words of appreciation and support ! ๐
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My pleasure
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No sorrow, no pain can collapse the heart! You take care of yourself and you will emerge as a new.
However beautiful your words may be, they are a brave cover up.
Let me write a poem on love to cheer you.๐ค๐
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I just am out of words to express my feelings after reading this ! โค
And I just loved the poem you wrote, it did the magic ! ๐
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Am glad it did. ๐
Take care. โค๏ธ
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I can’t thank you enough ! ๐
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Any time dear. ๐
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โค ๐
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How poignant. Hope that fire doesnโt douse, hope she resurrects โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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I’m touched by your words, thank you so much ! ๐ โค
I just hope that too ! ๐ ๐
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My pleasure always. Hope triumphs all ๐๐ธ
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powerful
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Thank you so much, I’m glad you found so ๐
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That’s so beautiful ๐
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Thank you so much ! ๐
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and the moment surroundings become comfortable
a hurricane arrives following destruction and relocation.,…………
you have no idea how much I resonate with these lines ….as if you were speaking my mind. It’s a beautiful piece……but once a fierce soul always a fierce soul ….bring it on life๐ค๐๐๐
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We are kindred souls ! ๐ However natural these emotions are, it breaks my heart a little bit when I know someone feels this way !
Yes, I’m trying ๐ to bring it back, trust me ! โค
Thank you so much for all the support ! ๐
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Beautiful and unfortunately, exactly how I feel right now. I’ve “relocated” many times and failed too many dreams to count. That spark to try again just isn’t there. I don’t know who you speak of in this poem, but it’s as if it was written for me. Thank you for putting words to the feelings I couldn’t figure out. Maybe now that I know what they are, I will know where again to start. Wishing you much love and joy and hoping you don’t feel the same. โค
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I don’t know whether I’m happy or sad reading this.
Happy because the poem made you feel the way it did, to help you understand your feelings, or sad because you had to go through this at the first place !
I just hope, you see the light at the end of the tunnel, and bring back that spark.
As my friends here have made me realise, the spark never dies, its just a matter of time. This too shall pass ! โค
Thank you so much for all the wishes and such amazing words ! ๐
I wish the same, and sending you endless smiles and happiness !<3
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It was surely meant to be. As long as thereโs remnants, a soul can still become fierce. A spark is all it takes, for a soul to ignite; into a raging fire, that can forever light up a heart! A really strong piece!
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It just amaze me how you simplify things that seem so complicated at the first instance.
Its just how you think and the way you put words to those thoughts, have a certain impact on me which always makes me think.
I’m so grateful to you for being there with such words always ! ๐
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Itโs my absolute pleasure to engage with you, and all those that my heart can impact!
I believe thatโs my calling; to go beyond the words and listen to the heart. To encourage, to bring a new perspective on how we use words!
You have a wonderful heart, be blessed!
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And that’s why I feel blessed to be graced with your insights ! ๐ They always force me to look at things through a different lens that’s always needed ! ๐ And I just can’t be thankful enough for this ! ๐ ๐
I’m just honoured !
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Thank you for the wonderful comment, the honour is also mine! ๐
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Bestt.! The way you put your thoughts into words is commendable.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and your kind thoughts ! ๐
I’m honoured !
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Aww.๐ that’s so sweet.๐
Xxx
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Thank you for stopping by ! ๐
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Pleasure is all mine.! ๐
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The exhaustion of life – ah! I know it well! Beautiful piece!
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I’m glad to know that !
Thank you so much for such amazing words of appreciation ! ๐
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Such a description of her journey. I relate. Beautiful poem. I love your poems
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Thank you so much for such loving words, and I browsed through your blog, I just loved it, I’m glad to meet you here !
Hope to read so much more from you, much love โค โค
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Apoligies – I am blind. I meant to say such a description
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No need for apologies my friend ! ๐ โค
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What an amazing poem. So intense. Words from a strong soul. -Jill
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Thank you so much, its always so good to hear from you ! โค
I hope you are well ๐
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I am doing well. Thank you for asking. Hope you are doing well also!
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Yes, I’m good too ๐
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So glad to hear that.
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