Collaborated scribbles 2 !

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He just wanted her to know that, it’s not wrong for her to either feel nothing or feel like everything is falling apart, its okay if the pieces of the puzzle are just scattered. He knew how brave she is, how she always stands by what her heart says is right, and those things, little or big, made her who she is.

He couldn’t even imagine how big a fight she had been fighting constantly inside and outside, and yet he found her strength completely adorable. The way she always rose like a phoenix from nothingness, was what he admired about her. And he just couldn’t stop acknowledging every single time she did that, how much he loved her, and how that love could never be tangible, for him to express, and even if it could, it still wouldn’t be enough.

He had been reading her all through the time he had been around, and off late he found in her a longing to find again the light, yearning to gain the strength she thought she had lost in an abyss. He just wanted to hold her and let her know, that she will find that light and will again shine bright like the glowing star in the moonlit sky, living graciously and moving ahead one step at a time.

She might be in an abyss but from where he was looking, she had never been that clear before, and he had the faith that it was about time she realised that she was fierce like the fire and that fire isn’t gonna burn ever.

She knew he had been reading her, and what made her restless was that he was quietly observing her, without shredding slightest of the clue of what had been on his mind. She was oblivious of the fact that he was preparing to make her feel loved and special, sweeping her off her feet, by the magical gestures of love.

His love had always been one of a kind, never pompous, always silent, just for her to know, just for her to feel. It was always his way of making every single thing about her, just like making her his centre of gravity, just like he was the fulcrum around which her life moved. He spoke with those pair of his eyes, and no amount of words could reassure her, but that simple peek into his eyes, meant the world to her.

He knew her like the back of his hand, more than she could ever know herself, and it was always his faith in her that made her grow, and become the person she is, it was his love, that was the manure, and his heart the ground on which she grew.

He was the light she was looking for all this time, and yes, it was about time she realised that the light that she had been searching for, had always been by her side all along.

 

This is another attempt of a collaboration between me and the one all my poetry is dedicated to. Its just one of those days where, you feel that not everything in this world is dark and unpleasant, after all. Another piece sharing with you all, words of the one who impact my life the most !

Please feel free to check out the first collaboration like this by clicking on this link. ‘Collaborated Scribbles’

-THEMOONLIGHTREVERIE

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40 thoughts on “Collaborated scribbles 2 !”

  7. A wonderful collaboration of thought, beautifully articulated piece!

    I must say, the last couple post; pretty well mirrors my own relationship. As I read, it sounds like I’m reading about how I view my marriage. It doesn’t matter what you go through as a couple, when the love is real; the love truly becomes a lasting collaboration of thought!

    This is a dedication to the one that inspires your poetry, but it’s also a reflection; that you’re allowing the light of love, to impact your heart. If the light doesn’t shine in, then all that you have left; is the darkness! Blessings to you!!

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    • Your comment just made my heart swell ! 🙂
      Thank you so much for such beautiful words, and it is such an honour to know that you feel that way ! 🙂 I admire the way you express your love, they have so much of wisdom and experience that it just makes me so happy to read your posts especially when its about love, and coming this from you, that’s why means so much to me 🙂

      Thanks so much for all your blessings, that means so much ! ❤

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  8. I hope you are in a better space now. There times we need a sign from those we love that all is well and they just assume we know of their love and should never have any doubts!
    Strange are the ways of love and it is so very wonderful to see you happy. 🤗❤️

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    • Yes, I’m doing much better ! Thank you so much for checking up. ❤
      Indeed we do, more than the sign sometimes even when the struggle is our own few words from someone, helps you to gather yourself. Just the assurance that they are there somewhere, remembering you everyday in their prayers and wishes, sometimes is all what we need ! 🙂
      I'm just overwhelmed by your kind wishes for me ! ❤ Thank you so much for being there ! 🙂

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  11. Fantastic, and a collaboration I can connect with on a personal level. A brief relationship in my past had the marks of this, unfortunately, it broke down from the weight and my own inability to be as selfless as I needed to be. As time passed, we found our way to better places where we could properly heal, but it was a powerful connection while it lasted. I wish you luck and truly honor the beauty of this collaboration; the depth of meaning and the beauty of the words. Really well done. — Stephen

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    • Its always a blessing too be able to have such a connection, even if it is meant for a brief period, its not just love, but it helps you to grow as a person at so many levels, and gives you a grasp at human emotions making you more empathetic and compassionate. I’m happy that you knew one such kind, and wish for you to find one in the future.
      Thank you for sharing your experience, and your thoughts on this, and making it even more special ! I’m touched 🙂

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      • It is really fantastic and the connection I had to it made it that much more powerful to me. I am confident these connections will find their way into my life, but I am also confident that they will find their OWN way… and time will be their guide. Thank you again for sharing at that GDG!

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